Listen to echo

I never tried to walk away from darkness
Never wanted to meet somebody else
And I cannot see the thing that is important
I cannot find a peace in local mess

Lost in time without a chance
Forget the steps in horrible dance
Take a step back, look at the cloud
The thunder is calling clearly and loud

Never tried to blind a sun above us
It seems impossible - one day without a lie
Can't do the works I have to do this morning
Can't do it all, but together we can try

Feel the wind, listen to echo
You are dear in my opinion
Feel the moment, listen to me
Your emotions - just set them free

Which is the best way to love?
Could you tell me are there anyone who knows?
Could you answer my very private question?
Do you like me, do you like me?
I make a suggestion...

Feel the wind, listen to echo
You are dear in my opinion
Feel the moment, listen to me
Your emotions - just set them free

Ocena: 4
Liczba komentarzy: 1    
Data dodania: 15.05.2009r.

maszróm 18 05 2009 (21:49:38)

Użytkownik ocenił pracę na 4
Wiersz ma w sobie duszę, aczkolwiek mnie nie zachwyca. Poprzez powtórzenia przypomina piosenkę - w takim celu był on pisany? Jest naprawdę ok, tematyka także. Uważam, że w ojczystym języku to samo brzmiałoby o wiele źlej i w ogóle.