Cry

You've created a prison
Inside your mind
You made yourself boundaries
And you're scared of what you'll find

You never seem to notice
All the good around you
You only care to look at
What you know will hurt you

You tell yourself stories
Which make you feel even worse
you make yourself think
everything is a curse

Everything is against you and nothing is right
Nobody cares to tell you to hold on, to fight

Please get me out of there,
Out of my cell
Please tell me something
That won't make me think I'm in hell

Please lead me through this
Please hold my hand
Please come with me
Just as I'd planned

When I was little
And naïve enough to think
That this would be easy
That I'd never sink

Now I am here
Making wishes every day
To know what I'm doing
And know what to say

The tears that burn
At night on my cheeks
Have made me a person,
A girl that never speaks

I smile and I laugh
So people won't ask
So people won't know
What's behind that mask

When somebody notices
And asks me why
I wish I could say
Why is it that I cry

but I don't know

Ocena: 5.25
Liczba komentarzy: 3    
Data dodania: 02.11.2008r.

maarziiii 15 07 2010 (18:14:20)

Użytkownik ocenił pracę na 6
Śliczny, najbardziej spodobały mi się 2 ostatnie sfory :)
Tak trzymaj ;DD

Zuanshie 12 08 2009 (19:22:40)

Mam nadzieję, że moja przedmówczyni komentując oraz wystawiając ocenę przetłumaczyła treść wiersza? Bo jakże można oceniać coś, co nie jest zrozumiałe? Co do wiersza.. Najbardziej spodobały mi się 2 ostatnie strofy. Nie mam zarzutów.

BajeczkaMajeczka 18 07 2009 (19:20:54)

Użytkownik ocenił pracę na 5
Bardzo Å‚adny wiersz ma coÅ› w sobie ;)